Horrible things
학생이 쓴 원문
Last year, When I was pulling out the car for go to the home, I felt strange.
I hit weakly the beside car. So I contacted that car\'s owner.
Fortunately, He said it was okay.
But I felt sorry. So, I sent to him mobile department store gift card.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Emily! I am sorry to hear about the situation but I can\'t help admiring you for your generosity and respect. Nice act!-Faith-
Last year, When I was pulling out the car for go to the home, I felt strange.>> Last year, when I was pulling out the car to go home, I felt strange.
I hit weakly the beside car.
I hit weakly the beside car.
>> I slightly hit another car.
So I contacted that car\'s owner.
>> So, I contacted the car owner.
Fortunately, He said it was okay.
Fortunately, He said it was okay.
>> Fortunately, he said it was okay.
But I felt sorry. So, I sent to him mobile department store gift card.
But I felt sorry. So, I sent to him mobile department store gift card.
>> But I felt sorry, so I sent him a mobile department store gift card.
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