Hospital.

2016-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I have noticed that my son had a fever and lasting cough. So, I asked him “Are you Ok?” He said “Father I can feel something when I swallow something in my throat” He looked like he was very sick. He had a high fever and his body ache all over like he mentioned.After for a while, his body was being shivering and he said that “I am too painful and feel like vomiting, Please take care my pain” So, I and my wife decided to send my son to the hospital. Doctor said that he seems to get acute pneumonia. There is possibility if the cold worsened, It can turn into pneumonia. So, he need to take the chest X ray and receive some medical test to find out the reason for the high fever.After some medical test, doctor said that he did not seem to have pneumonia .

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Hello, Mr. [Name]. Thank you very much for writing in our composition board. It seems like you had a stressful night and I fully understand why. When a patient has fever, it is usually an indication of an infection. Other signs and symptoms of an acute infection would be: nausea, vomiting, weakness and loss of apetite. Coughing on the other hand is a defense mechanism of the body. When a person has a prolonged cough, it means the body is trying to get rid of a foreign material from the respiratory tract. I\'m glad to know that your son doesn\'t have an acute pneumonia. It means the problem is not in the lower respiratory tract but in the upper respiratory tract which is relatively easier to treat. I really hope your sons gets better soon. See you again tomorrow. Good day and God bless. ~Teacher Charry I have noticed that my son had a fever and lasting cough. >> CORRECT! OR >> I noticed that my son had a fever and lasting cough.So, I asked him “Are you Ok?” >> So I asked him, “Are you Ok?”. He said “Father I can feel something when I swallow something in my throat” >> He said, “Father I can feel something in my throat when I swallow something”. He looked like he was very sick. >> CORRECT! OR >> He looked distressed. He had a high fever and his body ache all over like he mentioned. >> He had a high fever and his body ached all over like he mentioned. After for a while, his body was being shivering and he said that “I am too painful and feel like vomiting, Please take care my pain” >> After a while, his body started shivering and he said, “I am in too much pain and I feel like vomiting. Please make my pain go away”. So, I and my wife decided to send my son to the hospital. >> CORRECT! OR >> That\'s why my wife and I decided to take our son to the hospital.Doctor said that he seems to get acute pneumonia. >> The doctor said that he seems to have an acute pneumonia. There is possibility if the cold worsened, It can turn into pneumonia. >> There is a possibility that if a cold worsens, it can turn into pneumonia. So, he need to take the chest X ray and receive some medical test to find out the reason for the high fever. >> So, he needs to undergo a chest X-ray procedure and receive some medical tests to find out the reason for the high fever. After some medical test, doctor said that he did not seem to have pneumonia . >> After some medical tests, the doctor said that he doesn\'t have pneumonia.

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