Hospital impression
학생이 쓴 원문
For me, hospitals remind me of a very fearful place.
Of course, it would mean happy places to treat sick people.
When we think about dying there, it will be a sad place.
But it\'s always so scary and frightening to me.
Of course it is to reflect my psychological status.
From a different perspective, it will be different from me.
So, in order to hospitals be made a better place, doctors and nurses should have the love and kindness.
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For me, hospitals remind me of a very fearful place.
>> Correct
Of course, it would mean happy places to treat sick people.
Of course, it would mean happy places to treat sick people.
>> Of course, it would mean a happy place to treat sick people.
When we think about dying there, it will be a sad place.
When we think about dying there, it will be a sad place.
>> Correct
But it\'s always so scary and frightening to me.
But it\'s always so scary and frightening to me.
>> However, it\'s always so scary and frightening for me.
Of course it is to reflect my psychological status.
Of course it is to reflect my psychological status.
>> Of course, I need to reflect on my psychological status.
From a different perspective, it will be different from me.
From a different perspective, it will be different from me.
>> Correct
So, in order to hospitals be made a better place, doctors and nurses should have the love and kindness.
So, in order to hospitals be made a better place, doctors and nurses should have the love and kindness.
>> So, in order for hospitals to be made a better place, doctors and nurses should practice love and kindness.
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