hot day

2020-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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it is hot day. it was raining until last week. I was unaware summer season. but it was vary hot for this week . Typhoon is coming today. Korea is unlucky. normally Typhoon went outside Korea last years. Korea Goverment don`t decide corona alert level yet. Current level is two. I think to need level up. The news allways announce a dangerous situation. but people only warray about that. people is outside and meet the friend and drink . I drunk with customer yesterday. I reflect on myself before several weeks. I requested a junior staff to go SKHynix . but he said me no. so i Was surprised. I said again \"You must go to SKHynix\". He said \"I resign company\" I think this is mind of junior staff .

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. Be careful there then.

- T. Beth
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it is hot day.

>>> It\'s a hot day.

it was raining until last week.

>>> It has been raining last week.

I was unaware summer season. but it was vary hot for this week .

>>> I didn\'t feel the summer season but it has been very hot these days.
Typhoon is coming today.

>>> A typhoon is coming today.

Korea is unlucky.

>>> correct

normally Typhoon went outside Korea last years.

>>> Normally, typhoons does not affect the Korean peninsula.
Korea Goverment don`t decide corona alert level yet.

>>> The Korean government has not decided on the corona virus alert level yet.

Current level is two.

>>> We are currently in level two.

I think to need level up.

>>> I think the level needs to go up.

The news allways announce a dangerous situation. but people only warray about that.

>>> The news always announce a dangerous situation but people only worry about that.

people is outside and meet the friend and drink .

>>> People go out to meet friends and drink.
I drunk with customer yesterday.

>>> I drank with customers yesterday.

I reflect on myself

>>> I should reflect on myslef.
before several weeks. I requested a junior staff to go SKHynix . but he said me no. so i Was surprised.

>>> Several weeks ago, I requested a junior colleague to go to SK-Hynix, but he said no so I was surprised.

I said again \"You must go to SKHynix\". He said \"I resign company\"

>>> I told him again that he must go to SK-Hynix and he said he would resign from the company if I insist.
I think this is mind of junior staff .

>>> I think this is how junior employees think.

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