Hot day

2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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Today is really hot.It means spring is really short.Today's weather was really horrible.In the morning there was a little bit a little bit rain.And the ground was with watered.And there was a normal fine dust.Also there was a horrible yellow dust.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank you for Doing your assignment

drink a lot of water when the weather is hot

to keep you hydrated
keep up  the Good Job ^^



Teacher Brian



Today is really hot.

>>Today it is really hot.

It means spring is really short.

>>It implies that spring is really short

Today\'s weather was really horrible.

>>today\'s weather is really horrible

In the morning there was a little bit a little bit rain.

>>this morning it rained a little bit

And the ground was with watered.

>>and the ground is wet

And there was a normal fine dust.

>>and there are fine dust everywhere

Also there was a horrible yellow dust.

>>and the yellow dust is horrible





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