Hot day
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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for Doing your assignment
drink a lot of water when the weather is hot
to keep you hydrated
keep up the Good Job ^^
Teacher Brian
Today is really hot.
>>Today it is really hot.
It means spring is really short.
>>It implies that spring is really short
Today\'s weather was really horrible.
>>today\'s weather is really horrible
In the morning there was a little bit a little bit rain.
>>this morning it rained a little bit
And the ground was with watered.
>>and the ground is wet
And there was a normal fine dust.
>>and there are fine dust everywhere
Also there was a horrible yellow dust.
>>and the yellow dust is horrible
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