Hot day and next next week is school day

2017-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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In Korea,it's hot.Yes,it's hot.Next next week,it is the school day.Yes,it is.I have to go to school.Yes,you have to go.Unfortunately last vacation day is holiday.Oh,my goddenss,but I don't care.I'm care.School is not funny.Yes,it is because school is institution that where students study and play and eats.School's life is boring.One teacher comes to classroom and stay at 1hour and another teacher comes to classroom and stay at 1hour and the other teacher comes to classrom and stay at 1hour.I'm tired of this pattern.I want to eat icecream.Let's eat ice cream.Sure,but there is a quiz to you.Whether you solve the question or not, you have to pay the bill.What? Just kidding.Le't's go to the market.I will choose this one.(It's the most expensive icecream.)Then,I will choose this one.7dollars.Beside me will pay the bill for my icecream price.I don't have a money.You have a money because you eat a lot of food after you birth in the earth.You can sold the food that you eat from now on. What?

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Thank you for this composition.

Whether you like it or not, you have to go to school to learn to have a bright future.

See you on Thursday!

Good night!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


In Korea,it\'s hot.Yes,it\'s hot.

>> In Korea, it\'s hot. Yes, it\'s hot.

>> Or: Yes, it is hot here in Korea.


Next next week,it is the school day.Yes,it is.I have to go to school.Yes,you have to go.Unfortunately last vacation day is holiday.Oh,my goddenss,but I don\'t care.I\'m care.

>> The week after next week is the start of the school day again. Yes, it is and I have to go to school. Unfortunately, the last day of my vacation is a holiday. Oh, my goodness! but I don\'t care.


School is not funny.Yes,it is because school is institution that where students study and play and eats.School\'s life is boring.

>> Going to school is not fun. Yes, it is not because a school is an institution where students study, eat, and play. School life is boring.


One teacher comes to classroom and stay at 1hour and another teacher comes to classroom and stay at 1hour and the other teacher comes to classrom and stay at 1hour.I\'m tired of this pattern.

>> One teacher comes to the classroom and stay for 1 hour and another teacher comes to the classroom and stay for 1 hour again. I\'m tired of this pattern.

>> or: One teacher comes to the classroom and stay for an hour and another teacher will do the same until the end of the day. I\'m tired of this routine.


I want to eat icecream.Let\'s eat ice cream.Sure,but there is a quiz to you.Whether you solve the question or not, you have to pay the bill.What? Just kidding.

>> I want to eat ice cream. Let\'s eat ice cream. Sure, but there is a quiz for you. Whether you solve the question or not, you have to pay the bill. What? I\'m just kidding.


Le\'t\'s go to the market.I will choose this one.(It\'s the most expensive icecream.)Then,I will choose this one.7dollars.Beside me will pay the bill for my icecream price.I don\'t have a money.You have a money because you eat a lot of food after you birth in the earth.

>> Let\'s go to the market. I will choose this one. (It\'s the most expensive ice cream). Then, I will choose this one and it\'s 7 dollars. Someone will pay the bill for my ice cream. I don\'t have money. You have money because you eat a lot of foods.

You can sold the food that you eat from now on. What?

>> You can sell the food that you eat from now on.

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