Hot issue in Korea
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There is an issue on the embarrassing rule of the Silla hotel which is one of the famous hotels in Korea.
This hotel is the affiliate of Samsung.
One day a woman who had an arrangement at this hotel was rejected to enter there because she's wearing Hanbok.
She is a famous deginer of Hanbok and loves it so she always wears it.
According to the article, whoever is wearing Hanbok or training clothes can't enter.
Because training cloth is not formal and Hanbok has a wide width which might make other peple feel uncomfortable.
But what makes peple annoyed is the next news that one who wore Gimono which is the Japanese traditional cloth could enter the hotel in the past.
Korean is so sensitive of Japan with Dokdo.
Also, I can't believe there is a place to reject Hanbok in Korean ground.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday [이름]!
I don’t know if I should be happy because since Saturday I was really sick.
Until today, I couldn’t skip work because I am thinking of you guys, my students.
I feel burdened not to go to work so I still had to go to work despite my unstable condition.
About your composition regarding the Hanbok and Silla hotel.
I have read about it too! I was also surprised, though I haven’t really heard about the Kimono.
I think I’d like to talk about current issues also sometimes, especially about interesting topics.
-Tiny^0^
There is an issue on the embarrassing rule of the Silla hotel which is one of the famous hotels in Korea.
>>correctThis hotel is the affiliate of Samsung.
>> This hotel is an affiliate of Samsung.
One day a woman who had an arrangement at this hotel was rejected to enter there because she's wearing Hanbok.
>> One day, a woman who had an arrangement at this hotel was rejected to enter there because she's wearing Hanbok.
She is a famous deginer of Hanbok and loves it so she always wears it.
>>spelling check: designer
>> She is a famous desinger of Hanbok and loves it so she always wears it.
According to the article, whoever is wearing Hanbok or training clothes can't enter.
>>correctBecause training cloth is not formal and Hanbok has a wide width which might make other peple feel uncomfortable.
>>Training cloth is not formal and Hanbok has a wide width which might make other peple feel uncomfortable.But what makes peple annoyed is the next news that one who wore Gimono which is the Japanese traditional cloth could enter the hotel in the past.
>>spelling check: people
>> But what makes people annoyed is the next news that one who wore Gimono, which is the Japanese traditional cloth, could enter the hotel in the past.
Korean is so sensitive of Japan with Dokdo.
>>correctAlso, I can't believe there is a place to reject Hanbok in Korean ground.
>>correct
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