Hot weather
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These days in Korea it's really hot.We can only breathe.It's hard for doing outdoor activities.But when we turn on the air conditoner it's cold.And when we turn on the air conditoner it's really hot.Eating icecream with fans with 18degree of air conditioner is the best way to bear summer.Last exam is coming.I have to prepare for good grade.
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These days in Korea it\'s really hot.We can only breathe.
>> These days in Korea, it\'s really hot.
It\'s hard for doing outdoor activities.
>> It\'s hard to do outdoor activities.
But when we turn on the air conditoner it\'s cold.
>> Correct
And when we turn on the air conditoner it\'s really hot.
>>And when we turn it off, it\'s really hot.
Eating icecream with fans with 18degree of air conditioner is the best way to bear summer.
>> Correct
Last exam is coming.I have to prepare for good grade.
>> Our last examination is coming so I have to prepare for good grades.
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