hotel
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Hotel owners should increase the number of staffs, so the quality of service make improve.
At first theymust invest for te hotel innovation.
Alsp an online system is built conveniently, so foreigners can access it easily.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름],
I agree with you, due to the pandemic, the tourism industry was greatly affected. I am hoping that they will not be overwhelmed bu then current situation.
Aki~
Hotel owners should increase the number of staffs, so the quality of service make improve.
>>> Hotel owners should increase the number of staff, so the quality of service will improve.
At first theymust invest for te hotel innovation.
>>> At first they must invest in the hotel innovation.
Alsp an online system is built conveniently, so foreigners can access it easily.
>>> Also an online system is built conveniently, so foreigners can access it easily.
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