House and apartment.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to live at home. Because the apartment is too noisy between floors and there are too many people.
Yes, I agree with the saying that home is where the heart is. If only the shape is a house and there are no memories, it will not feel precious. I have my heart in my home.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I want to live at home.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> I want to live in a house.
Because the apartment is too noisy between floors and there are too many people.
>>> Because an apartment is too noisy between floors and there are too many people.
Yes, I agree with the saying that home is where the heart is.
>>> CORRECT!
If only the shape is a house and there are no memories, it will not feel precious.
>>> CORRECT!
I have my heart in my home.
>>> My heart is at home.
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