House chores
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day Arim!
Thank you for your homework! ^^ I hope you continue writing more sentences because they are of great help for your speaking skill too. You have good ideas. Keep it up! ^^
-T. Maine
If we live in the house, there are many house chores such as washing the dishes,
mopping the floor etc.
>>Correct!
However, Our parents do most house chores because we are students.
>>However, our parents do most of the house chores because we are students.
When we are students, we have to focus on studying.
>>Correct!
>>If we are students, we have to focus on studying.
If we do not, we can’t live better in the future.
>>If we do not, we can\'t live a better life in the future.
Also, when I wash the dishes, my mom and dad said, “just go and study.”
>>Also, when I wash the dishes, my mom and dad said, \"Just go and study.\"
>>Or: Besides, my mom and dad will let me study instead of washing the dishes. This means, my parents understand me.
>>Correct!
So, I think students have to focus on their study.
>>So I think students have to focus on their studies.
If we have a time, it’s good for us to help our parents.
>>If we have time, it\'s good for us to help our parents.
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