House Chores
학생이 쓴 원문
Before I was married, I did a little house chores. For example, making the bed and putting away the bed, cleaning only my room.
But, after I was married, I do many house chores even though I am man.
I have no time to study english and take a rest because of many house chores. So I sometimes have an argument with my wife about house chores.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
here are my corrections:
Before I got married, I did a little house chores. For example, fixing my bed before and after I go to sleep and just, basically cleaning my room only, but, after I got married, I do many house chores even though I am a man.I have no time to study English and take a rest because of many house chores that I do, so sometimes, I have an argument with my wife about house chores
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