Household chore

2015-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Today, I would talk about the interesting story about the relation betweens the income and the sharing of household chores. At a glance, there are not any associations between the house income and the sharing of household chores. But the study conducted by the Employment and Society journal shows that there is a association between them. The research team said we found that while men in these households recognize the need to help their partner, they remain reluctant to lift a finger and appear to simply throw money at the issue a cleaner instead. And the research team also said that myth of male incompetence is one of the reasons. It is rampant thought that men are unable to complete housework to an acceptable standard. I am trying to help out my wife. we are both working now. So, I can understand my wife's difficulties. If I have enough financial abilities, I think I would like to hire housekeeper for my wife and myself.

강사 첨삭

Good morning again Mr. [Name]!

And thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic. Well, I partially agree and disagree with the article since basically you said you are not among those men mentioned in the article. Not all men are like that of course. haha

Anyway, talk to you again tomorrow. Take care! ^^

Always,

Kathrine ^^

Today, I would talk about the interesting story about the relation betweens the income and the sharing of household chores

>> Today, I would talk about an interesting story about the relation between the income and the sharing of household chores
At a glance, there are not any associations between the house income and the sharing of household chores.

>> At a glance, there is no any association between the house income and the sharing of household chores.
But the study conducted by the Employment and Society journal shows that there is a association between them.
>> But the study conducted by the Employment and Society journal shows that there is an association between them.
The research team said we found that while men in these households recognize the need to help their partner, they remain reluctant to lift a finger and appear to simply throw money at the issue a cleaner instead.
>> The research team said that, \"We found that while men in these households recognize the need to help their partner, they remain reluctant to lift a finger and appear to simply throw money at the issue of hiring a cleaner instead.
And the research team also said that myth of male incompetence is one of the reasons.

>> And the research team also said that myth of male incompetence is one of the reasons.
It is rampant thought that men are unable to complete housework to an acceptable standard.
>> It is a rampant thought that men are unable to complete housework to an acceptable standard.
I am trying to help out my wife. we are both working now.

>> correct!

So, I can understand my wife\'s difficulties.

>> correct!
If I have enough financial abilities, I think I would like to hire housekeeper for my wife and myself.

>> If I am financially capable, I think I would like to hire a housekeeper for my wife and myself.

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