Household Chores
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme : [ESSAY] What\'s your thought on kids who were never taught how to do household chores?
I think kids must learn how to do household chores.
Because in house, mostly mothers do the household chores.
So I think kids must learn how to do household chores and help the mothers.
And when you do household chores, you can be did excercise.
So, I think kids must learn and do household chores.
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Theme : [ESSAY] What\'s your thought on kids who were never taught how to do household chores?
I think kids must learn how to do household chores. Because in house, mostly mothers do the household chores.
>> I think kids must learn how to do household chores because housework is mostly done by mothers.
So I think kids must learn how to do household chores and help the mothers.
>> So I believe kids must learn how to do housework and help their mothers.
And when you do household chores, you can be did excercise. [Please note the spelling of \"exercise\".]
>> And when you do the chores, you can also exercise.
So, I think kids must learn and do household chores.
>> Therefore, kids must learn and do household chores.
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