Househusband
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I don\'t care about who manage a house. I think that organizing and managing house works requires some talent. So those who have interest and talent in house management can manage their own house.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
You are right! I think that in our current society, we should ignore gender roles and instead focus on skills and ability. If a man can do house chores better, then society should accept it and not judge him only based on the money he provides, but rather appreciate his contribution and help.
- T. Caitlyn
I don\'t care about who manage a house.
>> I don\'t care about who manages a house.
I think that organizing and managing house works requires some talent.
>> I think that organizing and managing housework requires some talent.
So those who have interest and talent in house management can manage their own house.
>> So, those who have an interest and talent in house management can manage their own house.
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