Housewarming
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Because of the practicality and symbolism, many people take tissues or detergents as a housewarming gift. Both are a necessity in our lives. And a roll of tissue means that things will work well and detergents mean that many good things happen in the new house like bubbles of detergents.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I see! I didn’t know that housewarming gifts such as tissue rolls and detergent have meanings related to a good life in a new house. It’s nice because giving these gifts means you’re wishing the person a good life.
- T. Caitlyn
Because of the practicality and symbolism, many people take tissues or detergents as a housewarming gift.
>> CORRECT
Both are a necessity in our lives.
>> Both are necessities in our lives.
And a roll of tissue means that things will work well and detergents mean that many good things happen in the new house like bubbles of detergents.
>> A roll of tissue symbolizes that things will go smoothly, and detergents represent many good things happening in the new house, like bubbles from detergent.
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