Housewarming present
학생이 쓴 원문
Most of Korean people bring t oilet paper or laundry detergent as a present when they are invited to housewarming party. But, nowadays some people don\'t like to give or get those kinds of presents. The presents are so simple and practical, but they don\'t make hosts or hostesses touched. So, some people want to bring more impressive gifts to housewarming party. I sent an airfryer to my friend as a housewarming present on line before I went to the party. My daughter and my son in law bought a device which deals with food waste. Impressive presents are good, but they require some effort and money.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
Actually, when I first started watching Korean reality shows, I was also wondering why people kept bringing toilet paper or detergent, but later I found out that there was a meaning behind it. I also agree with you; household appliances are much more useful nowadays, and to share with you, in my country, those are common gifts at weddings to help the couple start their married life.
- T. Caitlyn
Most of Korean people bring t oilet paper or laundry detergent as a present when they are invited to housewarming party.
>> Most Korean people bring toilet paper or laundry detergent as a present when they are invited to a housewarming party.
But, nowadays some people don\'t like to give or get those kinds of presents.
>> CORRECT
The presents are so simple and practical, but they don\'t make hosts or hostesses touched.
>> The presents are simple and practical, but they don\'t make hosts or hostesses feel touched.
So, some people want to bring more impressive gifts to housewarming party.
>> So, some people want to bring more impressive gifts to a housewarming party.
I sent an airfryer to my friend as a housewarming present on line before I went to the party.
>> I sent an air fryer to my friend online as a housewarming present before I went to the party.
My daughter and my son in law bought a device which deals with food waste.
>> My daughter and son-in-law bought a device that deals with food waste.
Impressive presents are good, but they require some effort and money.
>> CORRECT
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