housing

2022-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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It does not mean the stability of house prices in Korea that house prices are dropping In Seoul. House pruces in Korea speally Seoul and surburb cities are crazy and abnormal compare to any other country in the world. The reasons are the result of speculation and the failure of the government housing policy. The worst serious problem is the interest rates on loans are increasing seriously.

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Good day, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for this! I guess the government need to provide new policies concerning ownership of apartments.
Have a great day!
Aki~
It does not mean the stability of house prices in Korea that house prices are dropping In Seoul.
>>>  CORRECT!
House pruces in Korea speally Seoul and surburb cities are crazy and abnormal compare to any other country in the world.
>>> House prices in Korea especially in Seoul and suburb cities are crazy and abnormal compared to any other country in the world.
The reasons are the result of speculation and the failure of the government housing policy.
>>>  CORRECT!
The worst serious problem is the interest rates on loans are increasing seriously
>>>  CORRECT!

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