housing prices
학생이 쓴 원문
Buying or renting a house in Korea is big burden.
So real estate policy is the most part of economic policy.
The government try to control housing prices by making new economic policies.
They ignore and don\'t understand the market capitalist system.
They want to control forcefully.
As the governent is making new real estate policies, housing prices are incresing .
강사 첨삭
Good day Ms. [이름]! Thank you for sharing a very informative thought. This is a real burden for people who wanted to live on their own. I hope your government will do something about it.
Aki~
Buying or renting a house in Korea is big burden.
>>> Buying or renting a house in Korea is a big burden.
So real estate policy is the most part of economic policy.
So real estate policy is the most part of economic policy.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> That is why real estate is greatly affected in economic policy.
The government try to control housing prices by making new economic policies.
The government try to control housing prices by making new economic policies.
>>>The government tries to control the housing prices by making new economic policies.
They ignore and don\'t understand the market capitalist system.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> They do not comply with the market capitalist system.
They want to control forcefully.>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> They are manipulating the system.
As the governent is making new real estate policies, housing prices are incresing .>>> As the government is making new real estate policies, housing prices are increasing.
>>> As the government make and revise new real estate policies, the house price increases.
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