How about action movie?
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If action movies don\'t have what young students can think of and only aggression, I would think they\'re bad for them.
However, my mention does not mean that all action films affect them in a negative way.
I would say that aggressive films are not educationally desirable.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
If action movies don\'t have what young students can think of and only aggression, I would think they\'re bad for them.
>> If action movies don\'t have what young students can think of and there is only aggression, I would think they\'re bad for them.
However, my mention does not mean that all action films affect them in a negative way.
However, my mention does not mean that all action films affect them in a negative way.
>> However, my statement does not mean that all action films affect them in a negative way.
I would say that aggressive films are not educationally desirable.
I would say that aggressive films are not educationally desirable.
>> Correct
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