How about you?
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HOMEWORK:
If your boss requires you to work on weekends in exchange for bigger compensation, will you agree with that?
If i, i work on weekends. Because my boss talked to me ‘bigger compensation’. As of now i think that i need to save a lot of money. But i don’t work on weekends often. I have to rest for my health.
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If I, I work on weekends. Because my boss talked to me ‘bigger compensation’.
>>> If I work on weekends because my boss asked me for bigger compensation.
As of now, I think that I need to save a lot of money.
>>> CORRECT
But I don’t work on weekends often.
>>> CORRECT
I have to rest for my health.
>>> CORRECT
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