How am I going to answer?

2010-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

학생이 쓴 원문

Jessica!! When you are greeting me, I want good answer(response) for you. But I can't do that. I just say only "yes"... I am disapointed my answerㅠ.ㅠ So I need your help. 1. How am I going to answer your greeting? 2. When I agree with your opinion, how am I going to answer? I joined another English class in the hospital two weeks ago. She is working as a middle school teacher in korea and she need volunteer activity. English class is free!! I am luck girl^^. The class open every two(second?) week. So I have two English teacher!! I surfed internet I found Jitney. It likes small bus and famous of publc transportation of in philippins.I want to ride a Jitney^^. 'I am the only one who making our thesis' like 'I preparing our thesis alone'?

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름]. Actually, there are lot of ways on how you can greet me or even anyone else. You may say, "nice to hear from you again", especially if we haven't met for quite a long time. Or you may say "Hello, good evening too", "I'm so glad to hear from you", "Hello, teacher! pleasant evening to you"!! or you may even ask "how do you do?". These are some ways in which you can greet me as you teacher... See you Mi [이름]!^^   When you are greeting me, I want good answer(response) for you. >>>When you greet me, I want to respond a good answer for you. But I can't do that. >>>But I cannot say anything.(better sentence) I just say only "yes"... I am disapointed my answerㅠ.ㅠ >>>I respond you with Yes only, so I am quite disappointed with that. So I need your help. >>>correct sentence. 1. How am I going to answer your greeting? >>>correct sentence. 2. When I agree with your opinion, how am I going to answer? >>>correct sentence. I joined another English class in the hospital two weeks ago. >>>correct sentence. She is working as a middle school teacher in korea and she need volunteer activity. >>>My English teacher is working as a middle school teacher in Korea and she needs to volunteer. English class is free!! >>>correct sentence. I am luck girl^^. >>>I am a lucky girl. The class open every two(second?) week. >>>The class is open twice a week. So I have two English teacher!! >>>So, I have two English teachers. I surfed internet I found Jitney. >>>I surfed the internet and I found the meaning of jeepney(Jitney). It likes small bus and famous of publc transportation of in philippins.  >>>It's like a small bus and is very famous transportation in the Philippines. I want to ride a Jitney^^. >>>I want to ride in  a jeepney(Jitney). 'I am the only one who making our thesis' like 'I preparing our thesis alone'? >>>I am the only one who is making our thesis.

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