How are birthdays celebrated in your country? How would you want to celebrate you own birthdays?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think we don\'t have any special things that we do for someone\'s birthday.
We just celebrate our birthday, and we get some presents from other people who celebrate our birthday.
And sometimes we hold a party for someone\'s birthday and celebrate it together.
I think there is no any special things that we do for one\'s birthday, we just celebrate it as other common cultures.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for sharing about your country\'s culture when it comes to celebrating birthdays. see you in our next class. ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
We just celebrate our birthday, and we get some presents from other people who celebrate our birthday.
We just celebrate our birthday, and we get some presents from other people who celebrate our birthday.
>>We just celebrate our birthday, and we get some presents from other people who celebrate our birthdays with us.
And sometimes we hold a party for someone\'s birthday and celebrate it together.
And sometimes we hold a party for someone\'s birthday and celebrate it together.
>>CORRECT!
I think there aren\'t any special things that we do for one\'s birthday, we just celebrate it as other common cultures.
I think there aren\'t any special things that we do for one\'s birthday, we just celebrate it as other common cultures.
>>I think there aren\'t any special things that we do for one\'s birthday, we just celebrate it like other cultures.
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