How are business or company dinners usually done in Korea? What are the usual topics for conversatio

2019-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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The dinner was so nice. Originally, the CEO would visit us alone but he accompanied his another member together. He is Vegan who can eat fish only, so the server recommended some dishes to him. The atmosphere at the dinner was not bad because they were so gentle and kind. We explained Korean business status which is decreasing sales amounts due to economy recession. They understood it well and asked what we need in this situation. In other words, they wanted to help us to increase the sales in Korea. We were having a dinner for 3 hours and we paid for the food by corporation credit card. After this class, I have to write an email to them presenting our hearts.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ellen!

I\'m so glad to know that the dinner meeting went well. You must\'ve been nervous in the beginning. Most of your sentences were correct. Good Job. I also placed alternative ways to express the sentences. I hope you won\'t be stressed anymore by Monday! Keep being the positive person you are! See you on Monday!

~~Teacher Kate


1. The dinner was so nice.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: The dinner was delightful.
2. Originally, the CEO would visit us alone but he accompanied his another member together.

>>Originally, the plan was that the CEO would visit us alone but he was accompanied by another member.
3. He is Vegan who can eat fish only, so the server recommended some dishes to him.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: He is vegetarian and can only eat fish so the waiter recommended dishes that would suit him.
4. The atmosphere at the dinner was not bad because they were so gentle and kind.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: The atmosphere during the dinner was light because they were gentlemanly and kind.
5. We explained Korean business status which is decreasing sales amounts due to economy recession.

>>We explained the Korean business\'s declining status due to poor sales brought about by the economic recession.
6. They understood it well and asked what we need in this situation.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: They understood the situation and asked us what they could assist us with.

7. In other words, they wanted to help us to increase the sales in Korea.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: It seemed to me that they wanted to help us boost the sales in Korea. 
8. We were having a dinner for 3 hours and we paid for the food by corporation credit card.

>>We had dinner for 3 hours and we paid for the food using the company\'s credit card.

9. After this class, I have to write an email to them presenting our hearts.

>>After this class, I have to write them a heartfelt email to show our appreciation.

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