How are businesses today different from businesses in the past?
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I think today’s business is more use media than past’s.
First, many corporations are using SNS like Youtube to promote their productions.
Second, Because of developmentig SNS like instagram facebook, marketing using influencer is also increase.
The businesses will be affected what media is developing.
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Hi Yu [이름], thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin
I think today’s business is more use media than past’s.
>>Most of the Businesses today use social media
First, many corporations are using SNS like Youtube to promote their productions.
>>First, a lot of corporations are using YOUTUBE to promote their products.
Second, Because of developmentig SNS like instagram facebook, marketing using influencer is also increase.
>>Secondly, because of the developed SNS like Instagram and Facebook, influencers use it to increase their promotions.
The businesses will be affected what media is developing.
>>The media can affect the different type of businesses greatly.
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