How are the social habits of people who live in the countryside different from people who live in ci
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I think the countryside people will usually enjoy interaction with neighborhood. In the case of the city people, they will go to museum, amusement park.
Relatively the countryside people will enjoy their hobby in smaller boundary than the city people
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Well done, Jenna! I appreciate your effort to finish your homework. I am sure you learned from them.-Faith-
I think the countryside people will usually enjoy interaction with neighborhood. >> I think the country people usually enjoy interacting with their neighbors.
In the case of the city people, they will go to museum, amusement park.
>> In the case of the urban people, they go to museums and amusement parks.
Relatively the countryside people will enjoy their hobby in smaller boundary than the city people
Relatively the countryside people will enjoy their hobby in smaller boundary than the city people
>> Relatively, the country people enjoy their hobbies in smaller boundary than the urban ones.
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