How are women\'s friendships different from men\'s friendships?(ANSWER)
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Hey there [이름]! ^_^
How\'s your evening?
Thank you for sharing your opinion about this.
I find it really interesting.
I think women are more comfortable with physical contact among their friends.
Most men are not very comfortable doing that with their friends especially in public places. :)
Anyhow, that\'s just my opinion.
See you again tomorrow! ^^
~Teacher Charry :)
Women play with friends at downtown, and take a picture with others.
>> Women play with friends downtown and take a picture with others.
They eat delicious and pretty foods and they give some gifts to others.
>> They eat delicious and presentable food and they give some gifts to others.
Men play game with friends and play many sports with friends.
>> Men play games with their friends and play many sports with their friends.
Womens leave memories with friends and take many pictures, while men do many active things with friends.
>> Women leave memories with friends and take many pictures together while men do many active things with their friends.
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