How are you?

2011-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi ^^ I couldn't write a composition yesterday. Becuase I had a a sore throat and I was really sick yesterday. What is worse, the mid-term exam will start next Wednessday. I have to prepare the exam hard. T-T Anyway, I waited you until 6:30 in Skype. How are you? What is the matter? I regret I couldn't take a class today. T-T Have a nice Friday and take a lot of rest on weekend. See you on Monday. Bye. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

I am sorry that we did not have class today. I tried logging my Skype but I couldn’t get in. I also tried calling your telephone number but it isn’t working either. Then at 7 am I tried calling your mobile phone but you were not answering your phone. I think that I am having a bad day. I feel so sad that we did not have class. I was also disappointed with the connection. I hope to see you on Monday and we will continue our class. You should also take a rest so that your sore throat will not get worse. Take care!

T.Faye

Here are some of your corrections:              

Hi ^^

>>Correct!
I couldn't write a composition yesterday.

>>Correct!
Becuase I had a a sore throat and I was really sick yesterday.

>>Correct!

>>Spelling: Because

What is worse, the mid-term exam will start next Wednessday.

>>What is worse is that our mid-term exams will start next Wednesday.
I have to prepare the exam hard. T-T
>>Correct!
Anyway, I waited you until 6:30 in Skype.

>>Anyway, I waited for you until 6:30 in Skype.
How are you? What is the matter?

>>Correct!
I regret I couldn't take a class today. T-T
>>I am sad I couldn’t have class today. T-T
Have a nice Friday and take a lot of rest on weekend.

>> Have a nice Friday and take a lot of rest during the weekend.
See you on Monday.

>>Correct!
Bye. ^^

>>Correct!

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