How are you different from your best friend? Describe your differences in terms of personality
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My best friend likes sports because he is very active.
But I don\'t like sports, l like reading books than sports.
My best friend likes black and l like vivid colors.
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Here\'s your edited homework, Jimmy!
Please take a look at the alternative sentences and correction written. See you this Friday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
How are you different from your best friend? Describe your differences in terms of personality?
My best friend likes sports because he is very active.
>> OR: My best buddy loves sports because he\'s very lively and energetic.
But I don\'t like sports, l like reading books than sports.
>> But I don\'t like sports, I like reading books more than playing sports.
My best friend likes black and l like vivid colors.
>> OR: My best friend prefers black color, but I like something more colorful.
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