How are you feeling? Cam.
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you feeling? Cam.
Your voice different from ordinary day.
Are you ok?
Did you go to a dictor? and took a medicine?
An Englishman usally drink hot vinegar with honey.
But It is best way to take a rest.You don't try hard your job.
First of priority is your health.
Take care dear Cam.
강사 첨삭
Awww... Sir [이름]..that was very very sweet of you..
You almost made me cry..T.T
Actually I\'m really really sick that I couldn\'t talk clearly because my nose is clogged..;(
That\'s why, I feel like the richest person in te world to have people like you in my life Sir [이름]..
I\'m so grateful to always have you Sir..I hope you know that..
DOn\'t worry Sir [이름],I will take care of my health for all of you..;)
Thank you so much for your advice and concern my dear..
I hope you always take care of yourself always..
Cant wait to talk to you again tomorrow..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
How are you feeling? Cam.
>>correct
OR: How are you feeling Cam?Your voice different from ordinary day.
>>Your voice today was different from the other days.Are you ok?
>>correctDid you go to a dictor?
>>Did you go to the doctor?
OR: Have you consulted the doctor?
and took a medicine?
>>correctAn Englishman usally drink hot vinegar with honey.
>>correctBut It is best way to take a rest.
>>But the best way is for you to take a rest.
You don\'t try hard your job.
>>DOn\'t work so hard.
OR: DOn\'t stress yourself on your job.First of priority is your health.
>>You have to prioritize your health.Take care dear Cam.
>>correct
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