How are you feeling? Cam.

2013-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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How are you feeling? Cam. Your voice different from ordinary day. Are you ok? Did you go to a dictor? and took a medicine? An Englishman usally drink hot vinegar with honey. But It is best way to take a rest.You don't try hard your job. First of priority is your health. Take care dear Cam.

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Awww... Sir [이름]..that was very very sweet of you.. You almost made me cry..T.T Actually I\'m really really sick that I couldn\'t talk clearly because my nose is clogged..;( That\'s why, I feel like the richest person in te world to have people like you in my life Sir [이름].. I\'m so grateful to always have you Sir..I hope you know that.. DOn\'t worry Sir [이름],I will take care of my health for all of you..;) Thank you so much for your advice and concern my dear.. I hope you always take care of yourself always.. Cant wait to talk to you again tomorrow.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ How are you feeling? Cam. >>correct OR: How are you feeling Cam?Your voice different from ordinary day. >>Your voice today was different from the other days.Are you ok? >>correctDid you go to a dictor? >>Did you go to the doctor? OR: Have you consulted the doctor? and took a medicine? >>correctAn Englishman usally drink hot vinegar with honey. >>correctBut It is best way to take a rest. >>But the best way is for you to take a rest. You don\'t try hard your job. >>DOn\'t work so hard. OR: DOn\'t stress yourself on your job.First of priority is your health. >>You have to prioritize your health.Take care dear Cam. >>correct

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