How are you going to celebrate the yuletide season?
학생이 쓴 원문
From 29 DED to 31 DEC I will have holidays.
This year, I didn’t anything for me. But I did much for our company.
I did complete our new factory. And I did increase 25% of sales amount.
Next year I will do much for me.
I said that I am planning to establish a new company. The company’s owner will be me..
During holidays I am going to think about my new business and to throw my plan into shape.
Of course one day of holydays, I will visit my father and mother and will enjoy end year with some delicous dinner.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Happy Holidays!.. Thank you so much for sending your homework today. I know that it\'s supposedly a rest day but still, you were able to manage to do your assignment. Anyway, I made some corrections below. Please read and review them. Good night! ^^
~T. Ritchel
From 29 DED to 31 DEC I will have holidays.
>>I will have a holiday vacation from the 29th to the 31st of December.This year, I didn’t anything for me.
>>This year, I didn\'t do anything for me/myself.
But I did much for our company.
>>CorrectI did complete our new factory.
>>Correct OR:
>>I finished constructing/ building our new factory.
And I did increase 25% of sales amount.
>>I was able to increase 25% of our sales.Next year I will do much for me.
>>Correct OR:
>>Next year I will alot lots of time for me.I said that I am planning to establish a new company.
>>Correct OR:
>>As I mentioned before, I am planning to establish a new company.
The company’s owner will be me..
>>I will be the company owner.During holidays I am going to think about my new business and to throw my plan into shape.
>>This holiday season I am going to think about my new business and will throw my plan into shape.Of course one day of holydays, I will visit my father and mother and will enjoy end year with some delicous dinner.
>>But of course, I will visit also my father and my mother and will enjoy as the year end with some delicious dinner.
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