How are you hoing to celebrate the yuletide season?

2012-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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I haven't special plan to celebrate the yuletide season. If I am a christian, I am going to hold a party and I will feel so good. But I am not an christian, So I think christmas is same like other days. On the contrary I can't understand why 12.25 is holiday. I think a birthday of Hangeul should be holiday. Thanks to Han geul we can have a mother tonge and we don't need to learn a english or a chines character. How appreciate to have a hangeul. we should be able to appreciate to our something.

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 A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU!!! Thank you so much for doing your best this year. Let\'s look forward to better years to come. You did well. I hope you\'ll continue doing your best next year. Take care, my dear Vincent! I\'ll talk to you again soon!  Let\'s enjoy the long weekend. I haven\'t special plan to celebrate the yuletide season. >>I don\'t have a special plan on how I will be celebrating this yuletide season.If I am a christian, I am going to hold a party and I will feel so good. >>If I am a Christian, I am going to hold a party and I will feel so good.But I am not an christian, So I think christmas is same like other days. >>I am not a Christian, so I think Christmas is the same like any other day.On the contrary I can\'t understand why 12.25 is holiday. >>On the contrary, I can\'t understand why 12.25 is a holiday.I think a birthday of Hangeul should be holiday. >>I think the birth of Hangeul should be a holiday.Thanks to Han geul we can have a mother tonge and we don\'t need to learn a english or a chines character. >>Thanks to hangeul, we have a mother tongue and we don\'t need to learn the English alphabet or the Chinese characters.How appreciate to have a hangeul. >>I really appreciate Hangeul.we should be able to appreciate to our something. >>We should appreciate our history.

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