how are you. I am [Name] son.

2016-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you think punishment is a good way to teach people a lesson? I think that a light punishment is nessary to lesson when someone bother nearby people and teaching a lesson is interrupted. but I definitely oppose striking punish because it is insult to humanity and it must cause a sense of shame.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^_^   I really appreciate that you find time to accomplish your homework. You have good ideas to share or impart and I enjoyed reading your composition. I have made some modification for you to review later on. See you in our next meeting.   ~Teacher Mayleen~   I think that a light punishment is nessary to lesson when someone bother nearby people and teaching a lesson is interrupted.but I definitely oppose striking punish because it is insult to humanity and it must cause a sense of shame. >> I think that a light punishment is necessary for people to learn a lesson. But I am definitely opposing violent punishments because it is an insult to humanity.

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