how are you, I am [Name] son.

2016-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Would you rather have quality or quantity? I think definitely that it is different on each occasion. experientially, We might think that the quality is more important than the quantity as we grow older and get richer. But I think that the most important thing is having both of them.

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Good evening! Happy Thursday, Mr. [Name]! :)   How was your mountain climbing activity yesterday? Thank you for doing your homework. I have made some modifications thought. I agree with what you\'ve written that having both is better. ^^ I\'ll see you tomorrow.   _T. Mayleen ^_-   I think definitely that it is different on each occasion. >> Correct! OR: I think the answer changes depending on the situation. experientially, We might think that the quality is more important than the quantity as we grow older and get richer. >> Based on my experience, we tend to give importance to quality more then quantity as we grow old. But I think that the most important thing is having both of them. >> Correct! OR: But I think having both is better.

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