how are you, I am [Name] son.
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you rather have quality or quantity?
I think definitely that it is different on each occasion.
experientially, We might think that the quality is more important than the quantity as we grow older and get richer.
But I think that the most important thing is having both of them.
강사 첨삭
Good evening!
Happy Thursday, Mr. [Name]! :)
How was your mountain climbing activity yesterday?
Thank you for doing your homework. I have made some modifications thought.
I agree with what you\'ve written that having both is better. ^^
I\'ll see you tomorrow.
_T. Mayleen ^_-
I think definitely that it is different on each occasion.
>> Correct!
OR: I think the answer changes depending on the situation.
experientially, We might think that the quality is more important than the quantity as we grow older and get richer.
>> Based on my experience, we tend to give importance to quality more then quantity as we grow old.
But I think that the most important thing is having both of them.
>> Correct!
OR: But I think having both is better.
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