how are you. I am [Name] son.

2016-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

"Weekends don't count unless you spend them doing something completely pointless." Do you agree? I definitely agree this sentence. In this world, I think that there are many people doing two jobs by poverty and meaningful something works without taking a rest in the weekends. They recognize that weekends is another week. They only have a few weekends in a year.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon. Mr. [Name]!^_^


Thank you for accomplishing your homework.

I also agree with this expression. I like how you justified your answer.

You even gave an example. I haven\'t tried having two jobs for I don\'t think I can take it.

I\'m not good with time management.

I salute those people who sacrifice their weekends to gain extra for their families.

See you later in class!^^ Enjoy the rest of the day!


_T. Mayleen :)


I definitely agree this sentence.

>> I definitely agree with this sentence or expression.


 In this world, I think that there are many people doing two jobs by poverty and meaningful something works without taking a rest in the weekends.

>> I think there are many people doing two jobs due to poverty without taking rest on weekends.


 They recognize that weekends is another week.

>> They consider the weekend as part of their work week.


 They only have a few weekends in a year.

>> They only have few \'weekends\' in a year.

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