how are you I am [Name] son.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^_^
I tried my best to modify your sentences.
The thought wasn\'t that clear, but it was still good because you mentioned some advantages of team sports.
I can\'t wait to talk to you again. See you in our next class.
Have a good night! :)
_T. Mayleen^^
I definitely agree why they develop collaboration skills and learn problem solving training throughout conflict.
>> I definitely agree. They developed collaboration skills and team sports to create harmony in the midst of conflicts.
So they build understanding, consideration, sympathy.
>> It promotes understanding, consideration, and sympathy.
One word, they have good human nature.
>> It\'s called human nature.
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