how are you I am [Name] son.

2016-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Participating in team sports helps to develop good character. Do you agree or disagree? I definitely agree why they develop collaboration skills and learn problem solving training throughout conflict. So they build understanding, consideration, sympathy. One word, they have good human nature.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^_^


I tried my best to modify your sentences.

The thought wasn\'t that clear, but it was still good because you mentioned some advantages of team sports.

I can\'t wait to talk to you again. See you in our next class.

Have a good night! :)


_T. Mayleen^^


I definitely agree why they develop collaboration skills and learn problem solving training throughout conflict.

>> I definitely agree. They developed collaboration skills and team sports to create harmony in the midst of conflicts.


So they build understanding, consideration, sympathy.

>> It promotes understanding, consideration, and sympathy.


One word, they have good human nature.

>> It\'s called human nature.

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