How are you I am [Name] son.

2017-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

"Things that would make my neighborhood better..“ There are many means to keep up my neighborhood something special good. I think that the most important thing is to have serious consideration of their privacy. Besides, there are a lot way to make neighborhood better, such as cleaning surroundings of my house, saying hello first to your neighborhood.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^_^

A happy Monday to you!


Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I know you\'re very busy, but you always find time to do these exercises.

Be careful with your spelling. Shortened words like gotta, wanna should be changed.

I will see you later in class.


~Teacher Mayleen :)



There are many means to keep up my neighborhood something special good.

>> There are many means to make my neighborhood special.


I think that the most important thing is to have serious consideration of their privacy.

>> I think that the most important thing is to have serious consideration on others\' privacy.


Besides, there are a lot way to make neighborhood better, such as cleaning surroundings of my house, saying hello first to your neighborhood.

>> Besides, there are a lot ways to make neighborhood better, such as cleaning the surroundings of my house, and saying hello first to your neighborhood.

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