how are you. I am [Name] son.

2017-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Make or compose two (2) sentences using the adjective 'FOND' and two (2) sentences using the noun 'POND'. 1,I’m not very fond of driking, but I get it due to social communication. 2,There are several reasons why people are fond of dolphins. 3,You may be able to find it floating while walking by a pond. 4,People are swimming in the pond.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^^

A happy Wednesday to you!


Thank you for doing your homework.

I really appreciate your effort. Knowing your a very busy person, you still find time to do this.

Your sentences are good, but there are some unnecessary words.

I\'ll see you in our next class. See you!^^


_T. Mayleen :)



1,I’m not very fond of driking, but I get it due to social communication.

>> I\'m not very fond of drinking, but I do it due to social responsibilities.


2,There are several reasons why people are fond of dolphins.

>> Correct!


3,You may be able to find it floating while walking by a pond.

>> You may be able to find it floating while walking by the pond.


4,People are swimming in the pond.

>> People are not suppose to swim in the pond.

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