how are you. I am [Name] son.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^^
A happy Wednesday to you!
Thank you for doing your homework.
I really appreciate your effort. Knowing your a very busy person, you still find time to do this.
Your sentences are good, but there are some unnecessary words.
I\'ll see you in our next class. See you!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
1,I’m not very fond of driking, but I get it due to social communication.
>> I\'m not very fond of drinking, but I do it due to social responsibilities.
2,There are several reasons why people are fond of dolphins.
>> Correct!
3,You may be able to find it floating while walking by a pond.
>> You may be able to find it floating while walking by the pond.
4,People are swimming in the pond.
>> People are not suppose to swim in the pond.
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