how are you. I am [Name] son.

2017-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Do you like listening and telling jokes? How do you know what joke is proper to tell to your friends? Listening and telling jokes can play a role of fatigue recovery if it contains respect and familiarity, therefore I like listening and telling jokes. The other way, you can make lower yourself to tell wrong jokes, especially seniors to junior. A piece of your jokes is a breath of fresh air if it has special consideration to other party and it can lift up other parties′s mood. If your jokes can make maximize other parties′s a strong point, you must be perceived a good man.

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Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! (^.^) Happy Wednesday!   Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework. I\'ve read your composition well. I got what you\'re trying to say. It\'s just that there were some unnecessary words used. However, I appreciate your effort and you did a good job in expressing yourself.   _T. Mayleen :)   Listening and telling jokes can play a role of fatigue recovery if it contains respect and familiarity, therefore I like listening and telling jokes.>> Listening and telling jokes can help relieve stress if it contains respect and familiarity, therefore I like listening and telling jokes.   The other way, you can make lower yourself to tell wrong jokes, especially seniors to junior. >> On the other hand, you can embarras or degrade yourself when you use wrong or foul jokes, especially seniors to juniors. A piece of your jokes is a breath of fresh air if it has special consideration to other party and it can lift up other parties′s mood. >> A joke is a breath of fresh air if it shows consideration to the other party and it can lift up each other\'s mood.   If your jokes can make maximize other parties′s a strong point, you must be perceived a good man. >> If your jokes can make other parties realize their strong points, you can be perceived as a good man.

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