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2017-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Writing Exercise: Should a government try to improve domestic tourism or try to attract international tourists instead? Why? Main reason is to stimulate economic activity . Consumer(a native or a foreigner) spending take off the aspect of several industrial, such as lodging industry, restaurant, shopping, etc...

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Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^-^ Happy Monday!   Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework. Although it\'s short, the idea\'s there. However, it did not totally answer the question. We can just discuss this later in class. See you then! :)   _T. Mayleen (^_^)   Main reason is to stimulate economic activity . >> CORRECT! Consumer(a native or a foreigner) spending take off the aspect of several industrial, such as lodging industry, restaurant, shopping, etc... >> Tourists, domestic or international, who spend money boost several tourism industries such as lodging and accommodation, restaurants, shopping malls, etc.

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