How are you, Mayleen,

2017-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Creative Writing: Is your government good at dealing with and tackling social issues? What is the biggest social issue affecting your country today? We have a headachy problems. It’s called “THAAD” It was set at some local district by Previous government. Chinese extremely oppose THAAD setting in korea, our opinion is divided into two. Setting THAAD seriously influenced Korean’s tourism industry and commercial transaction. US insist on setting THAAD to protect missile attack by North Korea, but Chinese oppose setting THAAD because of being watched from US. Korean was only troubled from both two powerful nations. We hope to solve these problems by a intelligent diplomatic policy wisely.

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Good afternoon. Mr. [Name]! :)   Thank you for doing your homework. I know nothing about THAAD so I did some research. Terminal High Altitude Area Defense (THAAD), formerly Theater High Altitude Area Defense, is a United States Army anti-ballistic missile defense system designed to shoot down short, medium, and intermediate range ballistic missiles in their terminal phase by intercepting with a hit-to-kill approach. (wikipedia) China\'s anxiety over THAAD has gotten to the point where its ambassador to South Korea would suggest that its implementation would destroy their bilateral relationship in \"an instant.\" (thediplomat)   Let\'s hope it\'ll never result to firing missiles nor waging wars.   _T. Mayleen :)   We have a headachy problems. It’s called “THAAD” >> We have a big problem and it\'s called \"THAAD.\" It was set at some local district by Previous government. >> It was set at a local district by the previous administration. Chinese extremely oppose THAAD setting in korea, our opinion is divided into two. >> China extremely oppose THAAD setting in Korea. Our opinions are divided into two. Setting THAAD seriously influenced Korean’s tourism industry and commercial transaction. >> Setting THAAD in Korea seriously affected the tourism industry and commercial transactions. US insist on setting THAAD to protect missile attack by North Korea,but Chinese oppose setting THAAD because of being watched from US. >> US insisted on setting THAAD to counter missile attacks by North Korea, but China opposes it because they\'re also being watched. Korean was only troubled from both two powerful nations. >> Korea\'s troubled by these two powerful nations. We hope to solve these problems by a intelligent diplomatic policy wisely. >> We hope to solve this problem by an intelligent, diplomatic policy.

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