How are you, Mayleen?
학생이 쓴 원문
Creative Writing: Would you like to visit the Moon? What would you do if you spent a day on the Moon?
I don’t want to live in the moon only a day, so I don’t also want to go there.
That are why there are no air, water, mountain... It seems to be bored full one day, How is stuffy!
Walking is also inconvenient because of less gravity.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! (^_^)
Happy Monday!
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
I\'ve read it well.
We\'ll in ny opinion, it\'d be a nice to spend a day on the moon. :)
It\'d be a once in a blue moon experience.
See you later in class.^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I don’t want to live in the moon only a day, so I don’t also want to go there.
>> I don\'t want to live on the Moon for a day, so I also don\'t want to
That are why there are no air, water, mountain... It seems to be bored full one day, How is stuffy!
>> It\'s because there\'s no clean air, water, nor mountain. It\'d be boring. How\'s stuffy is that?
Walking is also inconvenient because of less gravity.
>> Walking would be inconvenient because of there\'s no gravity.
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