How are you, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^_^
Happy Monday!
Thank you for answering your homework.
I\'ve read it well. It\'s very interesting.^^
We can discuss this in class if you want to.
See you later! :)
_T. Mayleen ^_^)//
If I was given the chance to be an animal, I would be a bird which lives in deep mountain.
>> ..I would be a bird that lives in a deep mountain.
It was free stress of bird which live in deep mountain.
>> It would be stress-free to live in deep mountains.
They are free from danger in the world and didn’t be scattered each others.
>> They\'d far from danger and wouldn\'t have to be scattered or separated.
Therefore They seem to be very happy.
>> Therefore, it\'d be very happy.
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