How are you, Mayleen!

2017-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing Exercise: Choose one (1) topic and answer or explain in not more than four (4) sentences. 1. Why are fewer and fewer people getting married? 2. Is mental health more important than physical health? 3. What does the expression, "money doesn't grow on trees" mean? 3. What does the expression, "money doesn't grow on trees" mean? 1,When  will  you  learn  that  money doesn't  grow  on  trees ? 2,Young men have to keep in mind that money  doesn't grow on  trees .  3,Money  doesn't  grow  on  trees, You  have  to  work  hard  to  be  rich . 4,Kids are  apt  to  spend  money  like  money  grows on  trees .

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!

Happy Thursday! ^_^)/

What happened to your composition?

Did you just copy it from the internet?

Anyway, thank you for accomplishing your homework.

I will see you again tomorrow.

Enjoy the rest of the day!^^

_T. Mayleen :)

1,When  will  you  learn  that  money doesn\'t  grow  on  trees ?
>> When will you learn that money doesn\'t grow on trees?

2,Young men have to keep in mind that money  doesn\'t grow on  trees . 
>> Young men have to keep in mind that money doesn\'t grow on trees.

3,Money  doesn\'t  grow  on  trees, You  have  to  work  hard  to  be  rich .
>> Money doesn\'t grow on trees. You have to work hard to be rich.

4,Kids are  apt  to  spend  money  like  money  grows on  trees .

>> Kids are apt to spend money like money grows on trees.

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