How are you, Mayleen!

2017-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer in not more than five (5) sentences. How does rain change your feelings? When can rain be dangerous? The rain give us pleasure or occasionally sad together. It should be a welcome rain during drought, but floodwater occasionally give us much damage. Specially, a localized torrential downpour make us more dangerous. Thunder and lightning would also be real horror.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^-^


Thank you so much for doing your homework.

The rain is associated with so many emotions such as loneliness, boredom, happiness, etc.

I personally don\'t like rainy days.

It\'s inconvenient especially when you\'re not at home.


See you later in class! :)


_T. Mayleen ^_^)//


The rain give us pleasure or occasionally sad together.

>> The rain can give us pleasure and sadness at the same time.


It should be a welcome rain during drought, but floodwater occasionally give us much damage.

>> It should be a blessing if it rains during a drought, but floodwater gives us so much damage.


Specially, a localized torrential downpour make us more dangerous.

>> Especially, a localized torrential downpour puts us in more danger.


Thunder and lightning would also be real horror.

>> Thunder and lightning could also be a real horror.

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