How are you, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^-^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
The rain is associated with so many emotions such as loneliness, boredom, happiness, etc.
I personally don\'t like rainy days.
It\'s inconvenient especially when you\'re not at home.
See you later in class! :)
_T. Mayleen ^_^)//
The rain give us pleasure or occasionally sad together.
>> The rain can give us pleasure and sadness at the same time.
It should be a welcome rain during drought, but floodwater occasionally give us much damage.
>> It should be a blessing if it rains during a drought, but floodwater gives us so much damage.
Specially, a localized torrential downpour make us more dangerous.
>> Especially, a localized torrential downpour puts us in more danger.
Thunder and lightning would also be real horror.
>> Thunder and lightning could also be a real horror.
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