How are you, Mayleen!

2017-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing Exercise: What do you think is the most beautiful thing about the Earth? Kindly answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ First, I think the most beautiful thing about the earth is mother’s face looking at his son friendly and mother’s rough hands patting his son. Socond, I think the word “ love, consideration, truth, thrifty, happy, hope.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^^

It\'s a happy Thursday! ^_^)/


Thank you so much for answering your homework.

You have many meaningful thoughts to impart.

I can\'t wait to talk to you again.^^

See you tomorrow!


_T. Mayleen :)


First, I think the most beautiful thing about the earth is mother’s face looking at his son friendly and mother’s rough hands patting his son.

>> First, the most beautiful thing about the earth is the affection between a mother and a child; how the mother looks at her child and how she pat his head with her hands.


Socond, I think the word “ love, consideration, truth, thrifty, happy, hope.

>> Second, I think the words love, consideration,  honesty, happiness, and hope are irreplaceable.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

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