How are you, Mayleen!

2017-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing Exercise: Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ What is your greatest fear in life? I think that my greatest fear in life is death and mortal agony. There will also be eternal separation of my families. Maybe, Loss is the biggest fear to my life.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^_^)/

Happy Friday!


Thank you for accomplishing your homework.

I guess many are scared of death and of losing someone so dear.

We can talk about this later if you want to.^^

Enjoy the rest of the day!


_T. Mayleen :)


I think that my greatest fear in life is death and mortal agony.

>> CORRECT!


There will also be eternal separation of my families.

>> There will also be eternal separation from my families.


Maybe, Loss is the biggest fear to my life.

>> Maybe, loss is the biggest fear to my life.

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