How are you, Mayleen!

2017-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Writing Exercise: Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^.^ Can you tell me about a famous historical person (living or dead) who if you had the opportunity, you'd like to interview? if I have the opportunity, I want to interview KIM YUNA. She is Korea's first Olympic gold medalist in figure skating at Montreal Canada. She was born in seoul at 1990 and retired in figure skating now, but she plays the role of promotional ambassador in the 2018 Pyeongchang winter Olympic. She should certainly be Korea's national treasure.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^-^

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I\'m not really familiar with Kim Yuna, but I\'ve heard a lot about her.

Being an athlete isn\'t forever.

She\'s still young but she\'s already retired.

Anyway, I will talk to you again tomorrow!^^

_T. Mayleen :)

if I have the opportunity, I want to interview KIM YUNA.

>> If I\'d have the opportunity, I\'d want to interview Kim Yuna.

She is Korea\'s first Olympic gold medalist in figure skating at Montreal Canada.

>> She is Korea\'s first Olympic gold medalist in figure skating in the 2010 Winter Olympics held in Vancouver, Canada.

She was born in seoul at 1990 and retired in figure skating now, but she plays the role of promotional ambassador in the 2018 Pyeongchang winter Olympic.

>> She was born in Seoul in 1990 and now she\'s retired from figure skating, but she plays the role of promotional ambassador for the 2018 Pyeongchang Winter Olympics.

She should certainly be Korea\'s national treasure.

>> She is certainly a pride of Korea.

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