How are you, Mayleen!

2017-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing Exercise: As people get older, their perceived value of time increases, so it's a practical topic that everyone has something to say about. What would you do if you had a few extra hours in a day? Answer in not more than 5 sentences. If I had a few extra hours in a day, I would read a book or watch tv for relaxing. If extra hours in a day give me everyday, I’ll make a detailed plans to do self improvement and then I'll practice them. But I think It’s very difficult to use my extra time efficiently.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^^


Thank you for answering your homework.

I agree that it\'d be difficult to manage time really efficiently.

We actually waste some of our time whining, doubting, or just by doing nothing.

See you again tomorrow! Enjoy the rest of the day! ^_-


_T. Mayleen :)


If I had a few extra hours in a day, I would read a book or watch tv for relaxing.

>> Correct!


If extra hours in a day give me everyday, I’ll make a detailed plans to do self improvement and then I\'ll practice them.

>> If I have extra hours every day, I\'d make a detailed plan on self-improvement then practice it as often as I can.


But I think It’s very difficult to use my extra time efficiently.

>> However, I think it\'d be difficult to use my extra time efficiently.

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