How are you, Mayleen!

2017-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Opinion: What springs to mind when you hear the word 'power'? Is power a good or bad thing? Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ when I think about power, the first thing that springs to my mind is authorities. Power sometimes is a good, But it most uses bad thing. In science field , power has very good meanings and is original of energy that operates all machines and the universe.

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Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^-^

I\'d like to share this quote about power by George Orwell.

\"Power is not a means; it is an end. One does not establish a dictatorship in order to safeguard a revolution; one makes the revolution in order to establish the dictatorship. The object of persecution is persecution. The object of torture is torture. The object of power is power.\"

I will talk to you again tomorrow. Enjoy the rest of the day!

_T. Mayleen :)

when I think about power, the first thing that springs to my mind is authorities.

>> When I think about power, the first thing that springs to my mind is the authorities.

Power sometimes is a good, But it most uses bad thing.

>> Sometimes power is a good thing but most who have it use it in a bad way.

In science field , power has very good meanings and is original of energy that operates all machines and the universe.

>> In the field of Science, power has a good definition and it refers to the energy used to operate machineries and equipment in the world.

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